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PostSubject: STORY IDEA: The Story of Kian   23/6/2010, 5:46 pm

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What is this nonsense? | The back story to this
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A really long time ago [I'm talking about 7 or 6 years ago] I would write my childish stories [and unfortunately for me I didn't save the only ones I remember >=( ] One of these Warriors rip-offs was something called The Way of The Lion [it's actually about tigers] It was a story evolved from another story I did a long time ago called White Lion about a guy and an evil pill and evil lion babies--- IT WAS STUPID OKAY?! Back to TWoTL [lol] I only have a page of this supposed to be 56 page monstrosity. [yes I had the exact number of pages planned] It had cliche character names, no quotations--- it sucked. But the mystery that surrounds this size 20 font story is the size 8 font story subject just written in the middle of the page. I have no idea how it got there, who wrote, and why it is the exact same subject as TWoTL's sub plot. This small paragraph story summary is a complete mystery for me.

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These words from nowhere | The well written version of the TWoTL sub plot
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The story of Kian

In the tiger clan called Kiang there was a curse laid in life it all started in Stone Forest. When a tiger was born in
stone forest it was possible it would be cursed with the demon of Kian, and it
would cause the mother to die.
So the demon Kian would live
and take strong lives to live forever. While the mother who died would look for
lives in Stone Forest for Kian.
And it happened, not to long ago.

That is the exact copy and paste of the words in the page. So with these mysterious words I decided to take the sub plot of TWoTL, [pronounced "tootle" in case you didn't get it the first time] and rewrite The Story of Kian, something that came from nowhere out of TWoTL.


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Mein Kampfy Story | The rewritten story
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The Story of Kian

In the tiger clan called Kiang, there was a curse
laid in the lives. It all started in Stone Forest, where a tiger cub had been mercilessly
killed for reasons lost long ago. The rage of his spirit created a demon so
evil, that when a tiger was born in stone forest it was possible it would be
cursed with the demon spirit of Kian, and it would cause the mother to die. Because
of these possessed lives the demon Kian would live and take stronger lives to
live forever, while the mothers who died would look for lives in Stone Forest for
Kian too. Lives were taken endlessly and without mercy. Though Kian continued
to live on with these stolen lives, the living mothers were making sure to stop
their cubs from wondering of into Stone Forest. Due to this, Kian started to
have the dead spirits of the mothers Kian had cursed lull cubs and mothers
expecting cubs into Stone Forest, so he could grow stronger. More cubs were
being born in Stone Forest and were cursed. The cursed kits were commanded to
fight and kill. With the demon Kian possessing them, the tiger cubs were given
strength and power at the cost of their lives. Unless a killed tiger was killed
in Stone Forest, Kian was unable to posses
its spirit. The more spirits Kian had, the more powerful it would become, and
Kian would be able to take stronger lives.


Confusing story is confusing isn't it?

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Haha u r teh stoopidz 4 riteing | Comment on this story
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If you liked this plot and might actually want a story derived from this, please comment! If you have any questions feel free to ask! If you read this whole thing you get a cookie!


Last edited by lou3797 on 15/7/2010, 3:17 am; edited 4 times in total (Reason for editing : Fixed the story alignment.)
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PostSubject: Re: STORY IDEA: The Story of Kian   23/6/2010, 9:15 pm

Seems interesting, I'd like to read it Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: STORY IDEA: The Story of Kian   25/6/2010, 1:27 am

It is a nice story isn't it.
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PostSubject: Re: STORY IDEA: The Story of Kian   25/6/2010, 1:28 am

Yes, Yes it is, so are you going to write it?

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PostSubject: Re: STORY IDEA: The Story of Kian   25/6/2010, 1:38 am

I guess I should :P
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PostSubject: Re: STORY IDEA: The Story of Kian   25/6/2010, 3:42 am

1. It's really good and I'd like to hear more. :3

2. WHERE'S MAH COOKIE?! DD:

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